Hey Manny,
Let’s start from the beginning — your book is a full package, with a deeply personal and inspiring story that really draws the reader in. Your writing has a raw authenticity that makes it relatable, especially for those who have truly experienced trauma or hardship. You did a great job blending personal experiences with broader societal issues like addiction and mental health, as it adds both depth and perspective to the content. I particularly appreciated how you tied your story to the mindset shift, focusing on the idea that change starts from within.
This gives a clear message of hope and empowerment. One of the strongest aspects of your piece is the honesty and vulnerability (you show when recounting your mother’s struggles and how they shaped your life), which was really touching. This, coupled with your drive to help others through your journey of mindset transformation, makes the story incredibly powerful. I think readers will connect with your message on a deep level and feel motivated to take control of their own mental barriers. Keep that genuine, raw voice throughout because it really works well.
The way you presented the intensity of your childhood experiences and the lasting emotional impact was perfect (chef’s kiss). I could feel the weight of the uncertainty and instability that you and your siblings faced as a reader — those moments of feeling homeless and lost. It’s not easy to write about trauma, but you handled it with such grace and authenticity.
What stood out to me the most was how you connected the past to the present (a small thing, but it makes a huge impact), showing how childhood trauma, in one way or another, shapes adulthood without being overly technical. Your reflections on trust and relationships were clear and inviting, making readers feel like they’re not only understanding but also healing. The balance between personal experience and broader insights into trauma was spot-on and well-presented. I think readers will really appreciate that mix of vulnerability and hope.
You explained such a difficult experience so well (my life isn’t easy either, as I don’t have parents, and I’m taking care of my ill sister). I really felt like I was the right audience for this book. One of the most memorable parts was the section on divorce and being separated from your children, which added real emotional weight to the chapter. You don’t just skim the surface — you take readers right into your pain, which in turn opens them up. It also makes the discussion on mental health feel even more urgent and necessary.
I particularly appreciate how you tie your personal struggles into larger issues, like mental health stigma in inner cities and the tendency for men to suffer in silence — such a good point. You skillfully balance personal anecdotes with broader societal insights, which makes the content not just about your story but about the importance of mental health for everyone. I also love that you include practical advice and coping strategies; it turns your story into a guide for others who might be facing similar struggles. You are a very good writer, and I’m proud of you. You are a strong man. Keep up the fantastic work… 😊
Sincerely,
Pooja Yadav
Editor
[ Her feedback literally brought tears to my eyes — I’m excited to get this book to the masses — Available now on Amazon ]